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From i-mcnamara@cornellcollege.edu:
This was a good idea for the competition, so good points for concept.  The
sunlight and the media well done, but the lighting for the rest of the scene
needs a bit of work.  It looks like there is an ambient value to some of the
textures which result in a flat looking object.  Also, the objects don't seem
to be casting shadows (such as the book on the bed) which is making them
"float" unrealistically above the scene.  Lastly, the sense of scale seems to
be a bit off.  Good work overall though, and thanks for sharing it.