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From skipt1@aol.com:
What are the lines in the sand?  Ripples?  They don't look quite natural.  The
lighting needs work.  Even though this is a night scene a blue fill light would
have helped.

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From rgow@lanset.com:
Dunes look good. Moon is too bright and looks too close.

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From i-mcnamara@cornellcollege.edu:
You've got a great start here, though I'd look into a more varied way to make
waves in the sand.  The moon is nice, especially with the glow, but it seems a
bit flat... any way to shade part of it to emphasize its spherical shape?  I
like that bull silhouette though.  Overall, good work.
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From ericf@foothill.net:
Nice moon and stars, good silhouette on the dune.  The dunes have a nice shape,
though the ripples look a little too sharply defined.

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From raytracing@grayproductions.net:
The sand texture is a little "all over the place".
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From darwallace@earthlink.net:
Sand needs work, bull is almost invisible.



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