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From rgow@lanset.com:
Grass looks good, but the image is a little too simple for my tastes.

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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:
The concept is good.  More attention to detail would add to the realism and
bring out the structure.  For instance the house looks too flat. Most houses
have fine structures that protrude and give it a 3D look .  The other ther
thing that adds to flatness is the angle of the camera (try changing that to
highlight the 3D aspect.
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From hildurka@simnet.is:
This scene is in a way a little too oversimplified for my taste. The house is
way too flat, and the textures need some adjustment, especially the brick
texture in the foundation. This flatness makes it difficult too see from where
exactly the light is coming from. But all this may be intentional, you don_t
say much in your textfile so it is impossible to know exactly what you had in
mind. My guess is that you want to express the thoughts of an amateur builder
(maybe Bob The Builder), using professional blueprints, but his outcome being a
simple, almost childish little house, completely out of proportions. That idea
I like.

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From chris_hormann@gmx.de:
Writing some more description in the text file would be strongly
recommended.
The lighting of the scene seems strange, the house base seems
non-uniformly lit 
although the light seems to come from the sun.  The plan does not seem to
be
appropriate for the house (the house on the plan is larger).