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From tom@tomandlu.co.uk:
The image-map and the lighting don't connect. Modelling and textures need
work.

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From matt@alledora.co.uk:
I'm afraid I don't see how this relates to the theme of Worlds Within Worlds.
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From onefastjb@aol.com:
That lightning look like a photograph, almost.

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From topher@csh.rit.edu:
It looks interesting, but how does this fit the theme?

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From thomas_alun@lineone.net:
Nice dramatic image. Not sure how relevant it is to the theme.
It could use some more detailed texturing on the ground, and maybe the
suggestion that there are other houses around (woudn't have to be too
detailed).


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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
The lightening effect look very nice.  The idea of a slum 
is conveyed by the run-down building, but the fact that 
it's the only building sort of ruins the idea of a urban 
slum.  If it wasn't for the sidewalks, I would be inclined 
to believe it was an abandoned farm building.  The 
leafless trees look pretty good, and also serve to 
increase the gloominess of the scene.

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Sky looks cool, but why is the lightning spreading up 
instead of down?  Shadows work well.  Ground texture 
could use some work.  Concept might work better if more 
of the world were shown (for example, if the slum section 
were shown to share a border with a better, more 
brightly lit neighborhood.)