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From philip.chan@home.com:
You've done a excellent job creating the feel of impending battle.  The fire is
a nice effect, however it looks as if it was floating above the torch rather
than coming from it.

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From thomas_alun@lineone.net:
Nice image, but I think the crackle texture on the walls is a bit too obvious.

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From lrwii@joplin.com:
The area around the sword looks. The texture on the 
walls looks funky. The shadow from the spear that hits
the outer wall is to sharp.

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Nice room... the various weapons look good.  It seems 
to me the bright light outside the room unbalances the 
scene a little... my eye is drawn to the right side of the 
scene.  Nice flame effect.  Stone textures could use a 
little work.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
A lot of good work here.  Particularly on the mirror, sword, and glass.  But 
the eye zings all around the image, with all its sharp lines and bright 
surfaces.  I think the lighting should be more subdued, particularly towards 
the top of the image, in order to draw more attention to the sword.

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From tm-ray@consistent.org:
The beaten copper mirrors are beautiful, but the reflection is
nonphysically bright to the point that I intially had trouble
understanding what I was seeing.  I'm somewhat less happy with the
stone.  The swords are great, although it seems the "mystical" sword
should be more different from the other, plainer swords in the room.

You're a better artist than poet. :)