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From nitro_glis@yahoo.com:
dude! thats sweet! those are the cutest things! only thing I could think of to
impoove it would be some focal blur and a new cloud tex. other than that, A+

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From philip.chan@home.com:
I like the idea of having the remnants of a snowball on the camera lens.  A
cracked camera lense would also be a cool effect to add.  The sky could use
some work, and the houses in the background could be more diverse.  Having a
basic knowledge of matrix algebra, I don't really find it that useful in POV
since a lot of what I can accomplish with matrices I can do with POVs built in
functions.  As long as you can visualize how an object is being translated or
rotated, I find that you can position it quite easily using multiple translate
and rotate statements.  If you need to condense everthing into a single
translate statement (for a macro) you can use the POVs vrotate function to
generate the translation vector.

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From lrwii@joplin.com:
The snow on the camera, good idea, but it doesn't look 
like it. And where is the snow on the other side of the 
road?

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Cute bears, as usual.  Snow texture looks good on the 
parts around the camera, but the snow on the ground 
and fort looks a bit blotchy.  Background elements look 
a bit like cardboard cutouts but give an interesting 
feeling of depth to the scene.  I personally don't like the 
title bar, and feel it detracts from the scene.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Everything seems to be laid out too precisely, as if we were looking 
directly down the Z-axis of the scene.  Sky desperately needs a gradient 
from the horizon to the zenith.  The bears, with their poses and clothing, 
are quite good.

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From tm-ray@consistent.org:
This is great!  My only issue is that the whole image looks cartoonish
except for the church, which is out-of-place.

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From delfeld@mailcity.com:
You are incorrigible with bears.  But you are getting good at making your scenes
work.  

Two comments:
1) Your copyright text should not get in the way of the image.
2) Try not centering a few renders.   See what things look like from a variety
of side-angles.  


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From r@206.11.233.205.dul.nc.chartermi.net:
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