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From tony@j4tb.com:
Your story seems a little hard to follow. 

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From elvish_archer@mailcity.com:
an alien lab

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From stephenhasmail@yahoo.com:
Very good concept.  I think you overused the psychedelic textures a little bit. 
A little simplification of the textures (maybe some kind of dark, metallic
look).  I think you wanted this scene to be on the "dark" side a little bit,
but it looks too colorful to really show an aura of evil (or something like
that).
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From StephenF@whoever.com:
The texture on the glass sphere looks good.  I like the 
shaping on the holder, but would have preferred a less 
busy, less colorful texture.  I don't really care for 
including the title within the scene itself here.

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From tom@tomandlu.co.uk:
doesn't really work for me.