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From bill@apocalypse.org:
the leaves aren't bent enough I think - they seem 
flat/2D.

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From YaelParis@operamail.com:
I dislike the textures of your submission. it's really sad because a good
texture will certainly improve a lot the background as well as the chair.


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From tom@tomandlu.force9.co.uk:
The lighting is nice, but the grass doesn't work and the background needs
more detail. The chair material doesn't work for me.

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From ameede@madmac.com:
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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
Nice ... but.

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From albiaprime@aol.com:
Technical - nice job on the treebark and the chair.
Artistic - unfortunate that the tree leaves are just simple triangles
Theme - a garden of sorts

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
What this really needs is more in the background besides bare hills - it looks
like
a garden that ends abruptly and then has nothing outside it. The plants are
okay
but the grass is a bit sparse. The lighting also needs to be a bit softer - the
shadows are very sharp and quite dark.