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From bill@apocalypse.org:
great butterflies - more focus on them would have been 
nice.  The tall grass looks a bit uniform - some differing 
angles might have helped that.

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From YaelParis@operamail.com:
Eh there's a lot of people who don't understand french. You condemn yourself to
be misunderstood ! You grass need more work it looks like plastic grass (which
is too straight also)

Beaucoup de francais pour ce round ! If faut que tu traduises ton texte si tu
souhaites que les autres jugent ton travail et n'utilises pas de caracteres
francais! 



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From whhale@nvl.army.mil:
This is an average ray trace.  No textures and everthing perfect.  Don't get me
wrong...I like the picture.  It just doesn't stand out.

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From tom@tomandlu.force9.co.uk:
A lovely scene, but it doesn't seem like a garden to me.

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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
English please ... I don't really mind but others might not gain much benefit
from the text.

The paving looks pretty good and natural so to speak.
And the distant hills are cool.
A rather good submission.

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From albiaprime@aol.com:
Technical - Butterflys (Sherbes??) tres, tres, BON!!!! Impressive
Artistic - Votre Design, simple mais effective! J'amour cette!(mal francais,
sorry)
Theme - a beautiful country path, close enough to qualify for partial theme

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
Beautiful flowers and butterflies. The flower petals could use a little bit of
curvature and some colour variation, but in general the foreground is very
nice.
The background however is rather stark and empty - it would have been nice to
have something here to fill in the composition. And to me, this is a path
through a patch of grass and flowers, not a garden... a fence or something to
indicate an active human presence beyond the path would help give a "garden"
feel.