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From bobfranke@halcyon.com:
The design of the pyramid looks about right.  All of the 
men seem a bit bow legged.  I would like to see more 
variety in their poses.  Maybe next time take the people 
to the next level an add the ability to change their 
poses.  Nice work.

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From gregj56590@aol.com:
Temple (a human engineered structure) looks a little bit too geologic (like
lava).
Sand is a bit boring & flat. 
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From kniazfam@ohio.net:
Good idea!  It's good to get away from the alien idea 
once in awhile. :-)  I only wish you had made the men 
look a little less cartoony, and a little more realistic.

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From grimmg@hotmail.com:
it could be very well but the 'humans' are like balloons (rounded)
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From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com:
Nice job on the armor.  The flag is very stiff, almost like wood and there are
no footprints in the sand.

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From manorton@tcnet.net:
The pyramid in the back is nice.  Would be good to see 
more of it.  And your poor solders look terably ow 
legged.  but very nicly done.

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From dick@buckosoft.com:
The banner is too regular. (see reflections)  needs a 
wave.
The faces are too dark.
Nice pic.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Figures seem a bit stiff and cartoony (who has legs that far apart?), but
obviously a good deal of effort put into the scene.  Very good theme -- unique
and right-on-topic.  Flat "floor" and sky are bland.  Good subtlety on the
pyramid, but (look in the reflections in the breastplates and helmets) where
are the other "fantastic buildings" ?


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From djconnel@flash.net:
"Clone wars" ? :)

This has a lot of potential, but all your men look exactly 
the same.
A little more attention to "little details" would go a long 
way
to making this a more effective scene.


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From east103@dialaccess.com:
Good job on the men.  Composition seems lacking somehow.

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From ethelm@bigfoot.com:
The first impression is good and on topic. Closer 
inspection gives the feeling that the Spaniards must 
have been very uncomfortable!

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From blaineholmes@hotmail.com:
I like the armor on the men.


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From r@haka.saunalahti.fi:
The people are well done, and the background is okay if a bit dull, but the
ground looks more like yellow concrete than sand - it's perfectly flat. Some
footprints and/or rocks could've been just the thing. Also, I thought they used
cloth for banners - this one looks distinctively wooden.