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From newkirk@snip.net:
High brightness and contrast wash out the image.  You need to adjust the
lighting more appropriately, or perhaps check that you have gamma settings
appropriate.

Blood is unnoticable...  I had to REALLY look to find it.

With the hand as part of the focus of the scene, you need better detail in the
form of it.  (especially thumb and palm)

I think the 'display' needs more physical presence.  It looks like an image on
paper laying on the floor.
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From kniazfam@ohio.net:
At first I thought it was a hand with the fingers bent 
backward.  After I read your description, though, I 
understood.  I like the general layout of the scene, but I 
don't think this will be a winner...

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From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com:
Nice job on the laser and the smoke it's passing through.  The alien's feet
should probably be bent or off balance since he is standing on an arm.

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From djconnel@flash.net:
The alien is nicely done!  Nicely textured, nicely
colored, and I really like the lumpy form.

The rest of the scene could use a bit more attention.
The blood was hard to identify.  The thing on the
floor, which I assume is some sort of computer,
is strangely designed. It takes up so much of the
scene, it needs to be treated with greater care.

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From east103@dialaccess.com:
I think I would have been better if the blood were not so reflective.

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From 101741.541@compuserve.com:
Quite pessimistic !

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From blaineholmes@hotmail.com:
I really like your laser beam.

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From clem@dhol.com:
The idea is fairly standard.  The execution isn't bad 
overall.  The human modelling is so-so, but the skin has 
more texture than most, which is good.  The alien is both 
well modelled and well textured.  Good job.  The blood 
looks like lightly tinted water.  The laser, though 
unrealistic, looks good.  The data screen or whatever 
you call it is the weakest part of the picture.  It needs 
much more detail.