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From scooby@pld.com:
Original, yes.  Realistic, sorry.  Add more blemishes to your textures.  Aslo,
scene is too spartan.

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From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com:
Too bad time was a factor, this is a good start.

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From gregj56590@aol.com:
Elements look cartoonish.
Door window should be transparent
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From bobfranke@halcyon.com:
This is a good start.  It just needs more of that precious time you mentioned. 
More creative textures and lighting will add a lot.

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From djconnel@flash.net:
Hint on the elements : You might consider using a series of
toruses which have been scaled in z, clipped, and offset.
These would do away with the "angled" problem you experienced.

I think your text file makes good notes to what sort of improvements
could be made to the scene.  Also consider using textures a bit more....
the scene is a bit too plastic.





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From r@cust193.webbernet.net:
You are right, the cupboards need detail and additional objects.  The wall needs
a bit of decoration, too.  You could have avoided the angular looking elements
by using a prism object with a cubic spline.  It is an original interpretation
of the theme.  This comment by clem@dhol.com.