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From jaime@ctav.es:
I LIKE THE BLACK SMOKE. THE OVERALL IMAGE IS ALSO GREAT.


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From cussat@infobiogen.fr:
Too much basic colors. Perhaps pastels had been better.

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From bnh@glasswings.com.au:
I'm going to be harsh here (sorry): Garish, colour clashing, cluttered. I think
it might have been quite nice if only the colours were better coordinated. Yet
another
person who is using premade figures.. *sigh*

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From cfusner@enter.net:
I liked the image well enough, but I think the story in the TXT file
actually surpassed it. ;)

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From chipr@niestu.com:
Nice effect of the figure "condensing" from the flame and smoke.  The city
doesn't look very "distant".  Is the story yours, or from another source?